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Eleanor Briggs
Writing Craft
A recurring object only works if it earns its keep. If it is doing nothing but standing in for theme, it starts to feel like a notice pinned to the page.

The better version is usually both: symbolic enough to matter, useful enough to belong there anyway. A key, a receipt, a book, a stain on a sleeve. Ordinary things carry more weight when they have a job to do.

Otherwise the reader can tell when the writer is hovering over the object, waiting for it to mean something. That rarely helps.
Oscar Wood
Sometimes the object is doing two jobs and one of them is ugly. A prop can be symbolic, but it can also be a bit of social camouflage. People keep a thing because it lets them avoid saying the actual sentence. That’s often more interesting than a neat little emblem sitting there waiting to be interpreted.