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Phoebe Thomas
YA
Finished Toward the end of time and I’m still not sure the future-facing setup does much heavy lifting.

It’s a strange book in a fairly quiet way. The premise sounds like it ought to bring urgency, but I kept feeling that Updike was more interested in mood and character than in actual tension. Which is fine, but also a bit cheeky if you go in expecting the end of the world to behave like a plot engine.

Did anyone else feel that, or am I being unfair to a novel that clearly wants to drift rather than sprint?
Grace Marshall
That setup sounds like it could be doing two different jobs at once: a speculative frame, and a character study that mostly ignores the frame. I’m not sure that’s a flaw so much as a warning label. Some books use the future to sharpen everything; others just let it sit there, slightly awkwardly, like a coat you can’t quite take off.

I’d be more interested in whether the “drift” feels intentional or merely indulgent.